Clicking on the Provide product feedback hyperlink eventually led me to here.
I noticed some "grammatical opportunities" at https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/windows/msix/overview; here they are:
- In the following sentence, "user centric" should be replaced with "user-centric" because it's a compound modifier (i.e., 2 words that act like a single adjective):
It allows IT Pros and developers to deliver a user centric solution while still reducing the cost of ownership of application by reducing the need to repackage.
(cf. Compound modifier - Wikipedia)
- In the following sentence, a comma should be inserted immediately after "MSIX":
With MSIX there is no duplication of files across apps and Windows manages the shared files across apps.
- In the following sentence, "open source" should be replaced with "open-source" and "platform independent" should be replaced with "platform-independent":
With the open source MSIX SDK, MSIX packages are more versatile, and platform independent.
- In the following sentence, "run time" should be replaced with "run-time":
Apply run time fixes to packaged apps.
You might also consider replacing "up to date" with "up-to-date" in the following sentence:
MSIX enables enterprises to stay current and ensure their applications are always up to date.
