Adam, thank you for sharing your opinion on writing styles. When I compose the blog post after the next one (ok, really the one after that) if I have questions about the tone and style I will leave a note to myself to study this comment and consider adapting the article accordingly.
I'm not putting odds on that happening, just saying that if it did I promise I would read this comment and meditate on it for several seconds at least. Unless something else came up. Then I'm not sure I could promise several seconds, but I promise that whatever time I had before I was disturbed would be devoted at least in part to meditation on the nature of blog content and style in a serious presentation format like the internet.