Oct 13 2017 04:07 AM - edited Oct 13 2017 04:09 AM
Oct 13 2017 04:07 AM - edited Oct 13 2017 04:09 AM
Hi there,
Sway shows on its start page a "Viewed" section, where I can see the Sways, I have viewed. In English, it looks like the following screenshot, when no sway has been viewed yet.
In German, this section looks like the following screenshot.
By using the word "angezeigt" twice in the message, the sentence sounds strange for me. Therefore, I would like to make some suggestions:
Suggestion 1
the suggestion is to replace the title "Viewed" by "Angesehen" and the sentence "Nachdem Sie einige Sways angezeigt haben, werden sie hier angezeigt." by "Nachdem Sie einige Sways angesehen haben, werden diese hier angezeigt."
Suggestion 2
the suggestion is, if "Viewed" could not be replaced, use another word for the second "angezeigt", for example: "Nachdem Sie einige Sways angezeigt haben, werden diese hier aufgeführt."
Best,
Mourad
Oct 16 2017 01:33 AM